my writer piece

Dear reader. I really wold like for you to check out my Cat in The hat essay. I feel as though this essay is my best writing piece because I really took sometime to actually think about this. I feel as though I stepped up my writing game and that I had alot of voice in this essay. The Cat was the easiest one to write about because it was too obvoious to see that he was dominated by the ID. From the very beginning of the story when he played "up up up with a fish" To the end when he used his machine to clean up the mess that he and his things thing1 and thing2 had made. I really would like for you to check out my green sentences because I felt as though I was able to push myself further into the essay by incorporating all of my greens into the paper. My yellow and red sentences weren't so bad I just feel as though my green sentences stick out more than my reds and my yellows.